LDeins's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Deadtonatorz]

Game is basically OK, but really boring. Other games with this mechanism normally have a upgrade system that "motivates" the player to try to get all the stars on every level. This also keeps the game interesting for a longer time than yours without such upgrades.

[The Broadenlands]

doesn't work on firefox (yes, I've tried to disable add-block): loading game, clicking play, book opens and just black window remains (with 2 gray stripes at the top)
because of this i've used explorer: game loads normal and is playable. But i also can't pass the lvl with the gap. Exit is not accessible.

[Everything for cube]

needs checkpoints. got annoying to start over again and again. additionally the jumping distance is pretty tightly for the given gaps. consider to make it greater.

2.5 for working game
+1 for the mute button :P
-0.5 cause of the missing checkpoints

DrunkBearzz responds:

There are checkpoints.Ty for feedback.

[sqrt Block]

Like the idea, it's really nice made.
but still needs a lot of work:
- mute button
- the trap block doesn't do anything, the floor drops no mater if the player walks over the trap block or jumps over it.
- some more levels of course

[Erne]

If you're new to programing games here is a personal rule of mine that every programer should follow to: as soon as got add some sound, music, sound effects, etc. also add a mute button. For all of the players who want's to listen to there own music streams of online TV. And as I'm one of there players i will cut of a whole star of my rating because of the missing button.

2.5 for working game
+0.5 for a decent graphic
-1 for no mute

Faker1089 responds:

Added toggles (albeit wonky because Unity) for music and sound effects.

[Metro Tunnel Escape]

Game was ok. The puzzles weren't very difficult, but they worked all without an bug or glitch.
Only thing i would complain about is the hint system. The color-puzzle for example: I've got an hint and the playground. But on the playground are already numbers ?!?! i just had do click them from 1-14 (or 15, don't know anymore). what about hiding the numbers at first and than showing them once the player clicked them in the correct order, as some kind of help to keep the order in memory. (just to make sure you get it right: no numbers at the beginning, than following the hint and clicking the first 5 fields correct => fields 1-5 are numbered. Than click something wrong and have to start over, but still having the numbers to make it easier.)

[True Colours]

NO MUTE BUTTON, annoying from the first second on.
Restarting to lvl 1 each time gets frustrating after the first few tries.
The coins shouldn't be objects. they can block the jumping, very bad if you try to jump over an obstacle and a coin is above you.

Nothing more to say, cause my ears start bleeding ... ahhhhh.

sheepcutlery responds:

Sorry about that, it was my first game, and I now am developing a game in java that I will embed in HTML so I can publish, thank you for the feedback, appreciate it.

[QB Nyx Strip Game]

The first 2 lvl were easy, the third got me frustrating. Theoretically both players should have the same chance to win a round. but after losing several times while she has still 80% of her live ... I'm getting the feeling she knows what the player chooses and therefore has a greater chance to win.

After reading through the commends and using THE trick on flash games to find active areas the rest was easy - i admit, maybe a bit too easy.

Oh, yea, one last thing: what about an adult version of your game ? would be cool.

[Paris Room Escape]

I agree to some of the previous reviewers, it's a bit boring since there are no puzzles. The only thing you do is run around and click everything in hope its collectable. Why don't you add some logic puzzles ?

And one last thing ... what were the seven towers for ? the .. towers of Paris ? don't know how it's called in EN, but there was no use for them in this game.

all in all a basic 2.5 rating.
Solid working game but nothing special or new.

[Factory]

Needs a MUTE-button !!!
Needs it badly, seriously.

25 levels and no level-save between ?!?!? really ?
Just played the first 2 levels, than it got to annoying (to ignore the music and try to listen to the TV-stream in the background, and to START OVER AGAIN AND AGAIN)

1.5 stars because it basically works, but if you want more start with the points above.

Zakenmaru responds:

Ok.
Sorry, I don't make games anymore, I make art. This was just a test to see if I could upload games on Newgrounds.