Just an average of a bit over 2 stars ?!?! Really? What a shame. Defenselessly worth 5 stars .. at least.
One day I'll get 5 stars xD.
>> Sure i've got it: Dinner!
Yea, you got me with this one.
But the over all sound level is a bit too high.
To be more precise it's 60% too high.
That's the level i had to reduce the volume in order to be able to enjoy your movie.
You might take this into account as you create your next one.
Thanks for the response, I'll try to even it out better next time.
My highest respect for drawing all of this by hand. I could never create something like this.
Thanks so much! Yeah, drawing by hand can look really nice, but it takes such a looonnnggg tiiimmeeee
how tempting ... definitely looking forward your game.
Looking forward to you playing it!
More please, love it.
I just love it. And i absolutely don't know what the problems are the others seem to have. Ignore them and keep it up. Can't wait for your next upload.
Wrong website for such contend. Just drawn stuff here, nothing real life. That's what i think.
ehm .. yea, what should i say ...
first: since i can't draw anything by myself i respect your art so far, but you should leave the intro away. you can't reach the visual standards of the intro and therefore your own graphics look really bad if you start like this.
Also, if you really want to make the move 20 minutes long you shouldn't disable the video controls of NG. Sound control, play/pause, scroll bar. Or, if these controls are disabled by default you should enable them.
Well, i understand that this is a teaser and you want to find some partners, but couldn't you at least make the teaser look a bit better ? moving mouths, the female voice was recorded in an empty room and doesn't fit the open-air scenario at all, the tanks at the beginning looked awful compared to the detailed back ground, ...
the movie is not that bad, but it's also not really good so far.
Well ... i'm sorry but i don't think NG is a place for things like this. It's basically ok and i'm sure the creator(s) put in a lot of effort ... but compared to the other stuff uploaded here it's kind of odd. I guess you won't find the right audience here.
( Why did you upload this as a movie ? i would categorize it as a game. nothing worse, just what i think XD )
First of all i want you to know that i like the idea and the theme. I would love to see a improved version of this. maybe even with some animations ?
And here is some critic (yea, need's to be):
- some of the animations are missing "frames". or at leased there are double once.
the 3.: when facing to left.
the 4.: one before facing to right. butt to viewer.
- it looks like you draw this with your hands. so some differences in the perspective view are
normal. but at the 2. one the feet are shaking around a bit too much in my mind.
- of course some color would be great. I'm having such a bad imagination XD
Keep going and improve your drawing skills. I would really like to see more art/movies/games from you.
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